A meme I posted a long time ago on lj

[mkrobinson]

Pick any passage of 500 words or less from any fanfic I’ve written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you the equivalent of a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what’s going on in the character’s heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you’d expect to find on a DVD commentary track.

http://babysitters100.livejournal.com/53582.html#cutid1 I think this is up to date, also my Sweet Valley oneshots can be found on my journal here http://mkrobinson.dreamwidth.org/tag/fan+fiction:+sweet+valley+series

Comments

[gloriafan]

From Right. Wrong. Confusion, which somehow escaped my attention the last time I updated my recs...whoops!

You don't know what to do, do you? Sunny's mother is dying, you know she is, and you don't want to pressure her into anything, and you really don't want to ruin her already fragile mental state to tell her that you like her, because you don't want her to hurt herself. Like Alex, even though you didn't like him, that way, you could have been a bit nicer about it. You could have been.

Dawn just called. Well, Mr. Schafer, to be exact. Sunny's mother is dead. You don't know what to do.